Sunday, July 24, 2011
MOCk-UPS for The PRomise
Version 1--not one of my favorites. The girl fades too much for my taste.
Version 2--no fire.
Version 3--girl is too dark and severe, I think. But perhaps that makes it spooky?
Version 4--Silhouette is too young. It's YA but not middle school. Or does it matter? I could change to an older silhouette I suppose.
Version 5--Expression is good but I wonder if this would still work if she were a redhead?
Version 6--My favorite but I worry the girl is too old.
These mock-ups are so April can compare concepts side by side. Personally I like version 6 best.
We'll see what April likes. This book is a YA book on a witch who may or may not have a destructive power. The main character is a redhead with gold eyes. But that can be edited.
What is your favorite?